I propose
you dispose
you shoot me cold hearted
I collect all bows
I try to build again and again
this all process makes me a man
for you dispose again
die hard, i propose again
_
© Hemendara KZ
caustic words and primitive art
I propose
you dispose
you shoot me cold hearted
I collect all bows
I try to build again and again
this all process makes me a man
for you dispose again
die hard, i propose again
_
© Hemendara KZ
Thanks for sharing. Initially the imagery causes femininity to hold sway as she proposes but as the bows pierce flesh; the proposals and the rendering of blood transforms the journey into a male experience which leaves us at the end with a proposal to consider, again, AND again. Love IT! I also love the simplicity of your word construction. I do.
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Again you did. Your adorable feedback 💛
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Great poetry to me.
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Hi, I took the liberty to do a podcast of your beautiful lines. I am on Anchor. I love your poetry, hope you listen soon.
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I’m very keen to listen
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Oh please i hope so too.
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Please send me links. Thanks a ton
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I’m not sure about THAT. A little tech challenged here. I podcast as Theexiledexhorter on ANCHOR for sure. Then other pods cast also like Spotify. I just love your sparse use of words which carry weight. I’m into less to convey MORE. I find a kindred spirit in your work. Muchas gracias!
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May I sincerely apologize for saying HER in relation to your page. I was derelict in my observations. Still love your sparcity of word usage. Regretfully I apologize Mr. Hemendara, KZ.
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Man commits mistakes. 😉
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Thanks for your gracious response Hermano. Keep writing and I will read!
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Love the manly perspective!
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Thanks for this beautiful feedback. Hope likes other pieces too. ❤️💕
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These pictures, you make them yourself?
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Only words are mine. Pictures are from other sources. Thanks for visiting 💛
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Ooooooh love your writing!
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Thanks 💛 so much love.
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♥️♥️
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Nothing like love gone wrong to bring out the best in people.. Good work!
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Thank you 💛
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So grateful I found your blog, keep writing, beautiful !
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Thanks chiara 💛
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